Thursday, December 16, 2010

Subtle

There are people who know what to do
when they are running out of time
I remain in the dusk of deadline
whistling sparrow tunes to approximate subtle

Fortune keeps its eye on me
but would not touch me on a dare
the last time we were together
you told me what to remember

A suitor needs a breath at times
his hand in the game is only chance
hope like ivy climbs at a steady pace
but withers without good root

There are places in the shade I remember
cool shadows that saved me
I will not turn my back on you or the sun
knowing both of you can burn me

3 Comments:

At 12:11 PM, Anonymous Anonymous said...

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At 6:43 PM, Blogger Isabelah said...

You're safe, cher. No messages or "friends" where they should not be.

I have a page of my own.


"I have let my hair down
Wearing blue, gold and brown..."

Peace on earth, good will between us?

 
At 2:05 PM, Blogger Germaine said...

I love this poem. I often think about studying the craft more by actually practicing rather than living in my head, but the more I read, the more I believe one is either born with it or not.

 

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